the dreams

[athena95]

Falling all apart *** Want to see my dreams come true *** Trying to make it right *** Want to go on and breakthrough *** I have a dream I wished it could be realized *** But when it happenned , it did for a moment and then it stopped *** They could not be real *** They were too good for that *** Now sadness is what i feel *** But i'm still smiling cuz no one has died and only my dreams ended too fast ***

 

[marypoppins]

It hearts you a lot, I can feel it, but that's also making you stronger, keep on writing what you're feeling deep inside of you, let your emotions guiding u !

 

[didi2010]

it's very nice poetry i love so much also a can feel it coz that think happen to me before so you can crosset with a brave heart like me so be courage ok and continue of your poetry Don't leave it inside you........................DiDi pretty

 

[athena95]

thank yuu all ! i will try to find the strength and be brave to go through all the pain ..